## Re: Read my new poem please.

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Posted by Kristi on April 09, 2000 at 01:46:16: In Reply to: Read my new poem please. posted by G.Andrew on April 08, 2000 at 19:05:41:

Andrew,
Once again, a wonderful poem. And good for you for not caring what "the disgusted ones" say. :o)
Kristi

: Hello everybody.
: Thanks to kristi,inspiration has come and i wrote another poem.This one had an Excellent from my teacher that I have seen today.I wrote it as usual in David Hoflinīs honor.I love you David!!!

: An age has passed since last I looked to you
: And still I find my passion yet undimmed.
: So much has happened,pain and triumph paired.
: My life and his,a distant echo shared.
: Like him,I lost a love sherished dear,
: But also found reward and purpose clear.
: His brilliant orbit soars beyond my cluth.
: Yet,like the moon he sheds his light on all
: While each receives his whispered private call.
: It matters not if he,in turn,can see
: The twinkling essence burning bright in me.
: Hello again,my secret treasured friend.
: īTis good to find you with me ītill the end.

: I hope that everybody reads this and tell to David how I like him,and I dont care what the disgusted ones say.

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    : Andrew,
    :   Once again, a wonderful poem. And good for you for not caring what "the disgusted ones" say. :o)
    : Kristi

    : : Hello everybody.
    : :   Thanks to kristi,inspiration has come and i wrote another poem.This one had an Excellent from my teacher that I have seen today.I wrote it as usual in David Hoflinīs honor.I love you David!!!

    : : An age has passed since last I looked to you
    : : And still I find my passion yet undimmed.
    : : So much has happened,pain and triumph paired.
    : : My life and his,a distant echo shared.
    : : Like him,I lost a love sherished dear,
    : : But also found reward and purpose clear.
    : : His brilliant orbit soars beyond my cluth.
    : : Yet,like the moon he sheds his light on all
    : : While each receives his whispered private call.
    : : It matters not if he,in turn,can see
    : : The twinkling essence burning bright in me.
    : : Hello again,my secret treasured friend.
    : : īTis good to find you with me ītill the end.

    : : I hope that everybody reads this and tell to David how I like him,and I dont care what the disgusted ones say.

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