## Read my new poem please.

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Posted by G.Andrew on April 08, 2000 at 19:05:41:

Hello everybody.
Thanks to kristi,inspiration has come and i wrote another poem.This one had an Excellent from my teacher that I have seen today.I wrote it as usual in David Hoflinīs honor.I love you David!!!

An age has passed since last I looked to you
And still I find my passion yet undimmed.
So much has happened,pain and triumph paired.
My life and his,a distant echo shared.
Like him,I lost a love sherished dear,
But also found reward and purpose clear.
His brilliant orbit soars beyond my cluth.
Yet,like the moon he sheds his light on all
While each receives his whispered private call.
It matters not if he,in turn,can see
The twinkling essence burning bright in me.
Hello again,my secret treasured friend.
īTis good to find you with me ītill the end.

I hope that everybody reads this and tell to David how I like him,and I dont care what the disgusted ones say.

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    : Hello everybody.
    :   Thanks to kristi,inspiration has come and i wrote another poem.This one had an Excellent from my teacher that I have seen today.I wrote it as usual in David Hoflinīs honor.I love you David!!!

    : An age has passed since last I looked to you
    : And still I find my passion yet undimmed.
    : So much has happened,pain and triumph paired.
    : My life and his,a distant echo shared.
    : Like him,I lost a love sherished dear,
    : But also found reward and purpose clear.
    : His brilliant orbit soars beyond my cluth.
    : Yet,like the moon he sheds his light on all
    : While each receives his whispered private call.
    : It matters not if he,in turn,can see
    : The twinkling essence burning bright in me.
    : Hello again,my secret treasured friend.
    : īTis good to find you with me ītill the end.

    : I hope that everybody reads this and tell to David how I like him,and I dont care what the disgusted ones say.

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